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introducing fashion boutique,,...any improvement for this?

Introducing fashion boutique,XX has potential jewelry buyers from home and abroad and makes it the most exquisite and high-end shopping venue.

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    potential jewelry buyers just 'customers for their jewellery'

    Come and see our exquisite works of art in this wonderful up-market venue.

     

    There are some confusing phrases :

    "...has potential jewelry buyers from home and abroad..." Are you promoting your boutique to suppliers or consumers?

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