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“Are you even aware of the vast list of things I’m risking here!?” he protested. “My fingers, my hand, my life and the list goes on."

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    Yes, it is correct. It sounds a little clunky, but the meaning is understandable.

    When spoken, there is a significant pause after the word life. I suggest ending the sentence: ".... my hand, my life --- and the list goes on."

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