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Is this an okay hangeul lyric for a song? 이 가사는 괜찮아요?

Just as a test, is it coherent enough to sound good? Does it make sense? Should the first 요 be ditched? And if it doesn't work somewhere, why? That's all I'm wondering at the moment!

드디어 봄이 온 것 같아요
이제는 달라지고 싶어
그댈 잃어버린 날부터
내 그리움을 가져간 사람
잊을 수 없어
잊을 수 없는걸
잊을 수 없어
잊을 수 없는걸

내 안에서 너를 지우지 못해
그 순간부터
난 당신에게 세계를주고 싶어

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