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Does this sentence make sense?

The streets are crowded during the Feria, CELEBRATED BY DRINKING, SINGING AND DANCING, an event not to be missed.

I suppose that the ed-participle phrase in capital letters functions as the adverbial, and its logical subject should be 'the streets'. Do you think the sentence makes sense? Does 'an event' refer to 'the Feria'? Thank you. .

For learning: English
Base language: English
Category: Language

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    It modifies the Feria.
    'celebrated by drinking, singing and dancing' and 'an event not to be missed' both describe the Feria. It looks really strange with two phrases modifying the same thing. I don't know if it's technically correct, but it's definitely not natural without some changes.

    The following is much better:

    "The streets are crowded during the Feria, celebrated by drinking, singing and dancing and is an event not to be missed."

    or even better:
    "The streets are crowded during the Feria, an event celebrated by drinking, singing and dancing and not to be missed."

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