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Nowadays, there are a number of schools where both, academic and non-academic subjects are very important for students' knowledge, because while ones help intellectual, others help creativity growth. Both have a great importance in children's life independently what they want being in their future. Sometimes fun moments can reassure students' stress caused by the hard day that they have had and help boys understand highbrow grounds.

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    Hello Angela, I will correct the passage that makes it simpler. The passage is well written, though at some points there are a few sentences that are a bit complicated.

    Nowadays, there are a number of schools that focus on the academic aspect, as well as the non-academic ones. While the academic aspect fosters the intellectual side, the non-academic fosters creativity. Both play a great role in children's life and helps them to be what they want to be in the future. Sometimes, fun can decrease stress caused to students by a hard day that they have had. It, also, helps boys to understand (highbrow) grounds.

    Well written, Angela. This is a beautiful topic you chose to write about and have done a great job in trying to express your views in it. Well done! :)

    Hello Angela, I will correct the passage that makes it simpler. The passage is well written, though at some points there are a few sentences that are a bit complicated.

    Nowadays, there are a number of schools that focus on the academic aspect, as well as the non-academic ones. While the academic aspect fosters the intellectual side, the non-academic fosters creativity. Both play a great role in children's life and helps them to be what they want to be in the future. Sometimes, fun can decrease stress caused to students by a hard day that they have had. It, also, helps boys to understand (highbrow) grounds.

    Well written, Angela. This is a beautiful topic you chose to write about and have done a great job in trying to express your views in it. Well done! :)

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