Correct me:- In Hindi we can say it like this (मुझे ठीक किजिए), but this type of phrase is not used is Hindi, if someone use it then it means "beat me up". But you could say like this 'अगर इसमें कोई गलती हो तो मुझे बताएँ ' (if there is any fault then notify me). It is obvious that a person is going to correct your fault.
Does this sentence sound natural? :- क्या यह वाक्य सही लग रहा है? (Kya yah vakya sehi lag raha hai?)
Correct this sentence:- इस वाक्य को ठीक किजिए (is vakya ko theek kegeyae)