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Jessiewyq
Here is another short paragrapy about Wedding, hope someone can check for me . thanks
Wedding business today is more commercialized. The booming wedding industry motivate many companies to sell their products and service by advertisement and marketing promotions in order to attract young people, the indispensible elements such as diamond rings, jewelries, wedding gowns and honeymoon all cost a great deal of money in weddings. Secondly, in today’s globalized world, people are often influenced by celebrity weddings either through TV or magazines, which inspires them to dream the similar luxurious wedding day. Finally, People today in developed countries are wealthier than their ancestor were in the past, they consider that wedding is the most important event in people’ lives and it is worthwhile to spend lavishly in such occasions.
May 20, 2013 3:48 PM
Jessiewyq
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English
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