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The Police almost caused a riot after they grabbed one of their suspects by their collar.

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    I would change "their " to "the suspects" if the reader already knows which suspects you are talking about.
    I would change "their collar" to "his collar" if the person was a male, "her collar" if she was a female. The rest sounds good.

     

    Correction:
    The police almost caused a riot, after they grabbed one of their suspects by his/her collar.

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