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Many customers opt for the cheapest, efficient products.
I selected the most, inexpensive shirt, since it is appealing.
I chose to go there after my friends refused.
The path wound among the five statues in the garden.
As much your goal is to fight, as much as my goal is to bring peace.
If Alysha was never smitten by the thief's handsome appearance, then she would've never got her stuff stolen.
The CEO decided to diversify the company's products.

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    Many customers opt for the cheapest, efficient products.

    Perhaps you mean ==> Many customers opt for the cheapest, most efficient products.
    Many customers opt for the cheapest, products that are also efficient.

    I selected the most, inexpensive shirt, since it is appealing. - OK
    ? I selected the most, inexpensive shirt, that I liked.

    I chose to go there after my friends refused. OK, but a little strange.
    When my friends refused, I went on my own.?

    The path wound among the five statues in the garden. - OK
    wound among ?
    The path wound round the five statues in the garden. - OK
    The path meandered between the five statues in the garden. - OK

    As much your goal is to fight, as much as my goal is to bring peace. X
    As much as your goal is to fight, my goal is to bring peace.

    If Alysha was never smitten by the thief's handsome appearance, then she would've never got her stuff stolen.
    --> would never have had

    Using "never" like this is common oral English, but not really sensible.

    If Alysha had never been smitten by the thief's handsome appearance, she would never have had her stuff stolen.

    If Alysha had never been smitten by the thief's handsome appearance, she would not have had her stuff stolen.

    If Alysha had not been smitten by the thief's handsome appearance, she would not have had her stuff stolen.

    The CEO decided to diversify the company's products. - OK

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