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The energy consumed by these equipments must be cheap and plentiful so that billions of poor people in developing regions can afford them and use them to improve their live.

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    "Equipment" is a non-count noun, and should not be used with an -s. So, "this equipment"
    Also, billions of people ,so there is more than one life.. "improve their lives"

    I prefer saying

    The energy used by these machines must be affordable and available in abundance so that billions of poor people ...

    In developing regions can afford to use the machines.

    Be careful with the way you used the word them as one can think them refers to the energy.

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