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remains high? is this sentence right/?

 

At the same time, the price of the jewelry and raw material remains high.

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    It's pretty good. However, you have used a definite article for jewelry, but it is clear that you are not talking about specific jewelry, but jewelry in general. I would omit the article as Jewelry is an uncountable noun.

    'Price' may or may not be the right adjective here. If you are talking about this as one who produces jewelry, and therefore buys the raw materials, it would be more appropriate to use the word 'cost'. Cost implies that the price paid becomes a component of something else. A price is made up of costs + profit margin.

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