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the inevitable result? is this too awkward? is this sentence okay?

 

Both the suppliers and the manufacturers need a close link and the Purchasing Event would be the inevitable result of the market development.

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    I would consider splitting it into two sentences, especially if it's going to be used in written form due to wordiness. I would suggest: Both the suppliers and the manufacturers need a closer link. The purchasing event would indicate results of marketing development.

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