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Is this acceptable ダジャレ?

「ホシザキで欲しい雑貨」

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I am learning Japanese, and I enjoy visiting the local sushi bar. On a recent visit, I noticed that the device used to store sashimi was made by a company named "hoshizaki". Since the hoshizaki is fully of things I want, I tried to create this dajare. Is it appropriate?

For learning: Japanese
Base language: English
Category: Language

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    Best Answer - Chosen by the Asker
    This is pretty close. The gap between ‘zaki’ and ‘zakka’ is too far apart to get a laugh, as I hear it.
    Vowels matter more than consonants in similarity in terms of pun.
    Come back with a new one. You can do it.

    I guess it's a little hard.

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