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给挫折一个微笑,它能给你战胜挫折的意志。我们要做生活的主人,不要坐在绊脚石的面前唉声叹气而耗尽了自己,学会微笑着用有限的生命来超越无限的自己。人生挫折是一个人迈向成功的征途中所必须认真对待的一个课题。只有仔细回味把握人生挫折,才能真正领会感悟人生的乐趣,也只有在战胜了人生挫折以后,才能真正走向成功。
  A smiling face to our setback will strengthen your will to conquer setbacks. Mastering your life, instead of exhausting ourselves by sitting in front of the stumbling block and sighing in despair. Learn to surpass infinite selves positively during our limited life. We must take the setbacks seriously on the path towards success. Only a conscientious summary of setback can make you comprehend the delight of life; and you can achieve success after overcoming frustrations.

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    "Mastering your life, instead of exhausting ourselves by sitting in front of the stumbling block and sighing in despair."

    ^ This sentence sounds like a fragment or incomplete in thought. Mastering your life what? What happens then? Is this a command, is this a statement? What is the purpose of saying this? There needs to be a follow-up to it. Statements with commas that do not elaborate on the first part are not good sentences. A bad example is: "Eating healthy food, instead of eating junk and getting no nutrition." Eating healthy food what? Again, what's the purpose of stating this? It seems that there is no point to this sentence because it does not say anything of substance. A good sentence would be: "Eating healthy food, instead of eating junk and getting no nutrition from it, is a much better choice for your body." This sentence states that doing this has a result of some sort. But the sentence you wrote has no result, making it void of meaning.

    "Only a conscientious summary of setback can make you comprehend the delight of life; and you can achieve success after overcoming frustrations."

    ^ You have to either say "a setback" or "setbacks." Hanging words without articles are not good unless mentioned in plural because the word is a common noun and not a proper noun (not a name).

    ^ Do you mean "the delights" of life? It would be beneficial to say it in plural form rather than in singular because life has more than one delight.

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