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From the picture, we can see many people crossing the street play their cell phone, and using walking sticks to identify direction. This picture tell us a phenomenon in society that many people are too much addicted to cell phone.
As we all know ,with the develop of information age, the cell phone plays an important in role. More and more playing the cell phone anytime. People always playing the cell phone at their working. Because they are to do it, lead to the quality for their work.. some people ,such as student ,they are plays cell phone in class, it can effect their study . same time, people will plays cell phone before sleep. It will do harm their eyes and their the quality of sleep.
In short, although the cell phone is important for our life, but we can reduce using cell phone, for our healthy and happiness.