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Are these sentences correct?? (My first business trip to China 1) 1. Last week, I went on a business trip to Hong Kong and Kunshan near Shanghai with my colleague. 2. That was my first business trip since I entered my company and also was first time for me to visit China. 3. I stayed in Hong Kong for 2 days. On the first day in Honk Kong, we had a business meeting with a president of a distributor while having dinner together. 4. The distributor has such a long relationship with our company. 5. On the second day, we had a business meeting with another distributor which we have recently started dealings. 6. After the meeting, we went out for lunch together. 7. The distributor treated us for the lunch with Cantonese cuisine at a fancy Chinese restaurant. I await your help!
Jul 13, 2014 10:14 AM
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1. Correct 2. That was my first business trip since I entered my company and also was THE first time for me to visit China. 3. I stayed in Hong Kong for 2 days. On the first day (no need to repeat in Hong Kong), we had a business meeting with THE president of a distributor while having dinner together. 4. The distributor has a VERY long relationship with our company. 5. On the second day, we had a business meeting with another distributor which we have recently started DEALING WITH. 6. Correct 7. The distributor treated us WITH A lunch OF Cantonese cuisine at a fancy Chinese restaurant.
July 13, 2014
Ching san. Thank you for your comment and question. A long relationship= We have build a very good relationship each other for a long time. This is what I wanted to say :) Regards
July 13, 2014
I am a chinese,learning english for several yeas. i think that your expression is good,but i cannot understnd the meaning of "a long relationship" ,do you mean a kind of complex relationship?
July 13, 2014
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