Thiago
How do you spend your time? How I spend my time. I spend one hour to take a shower, brush my teeth, take a breakfast and for it i'll buy the bread all days, but the breads are so good that it's fine i go to buy it. After my father take me to get on the trem, the trem is not so far my house but the bus is very slow, so he take me. When i arrive the end station i walk more fifteen minute until my work. In my company i job nine hours per day, i spend one hour to lunch, half hour talking with people and other half hour surfing the internet. The night i spend one hour and half to came back my home. I arrive and dine. Then i call my girlfriend, we talk, talk. After I go to do some exercises bodybuilding, watch tv, study english, watch a film in the internet that i like it a lot. I finally to sleep. P.S I hope who you like it.
Jul 23, 2014 12:46 PM
Answers · 2
I agree, this is good and should be in Notebook. You would benefit a lot from the corrections.
July 23, 2014
This looks good. If you repost it in the Notebook section, people will correct it for you.
July 23, 2014
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