Need some help
Hello friends!
I would like to excuse for my inappropriate question, but I have started losing heart. Recently I wrote three entries here and only one of them was corrected.
Friends, could you be so kind to review, at least, my last text that I submitted yesterday?
It is here http://www.italki.com/entry/465071
Thanks in advance.
Hi
I am sorry for how you feel, I think if you made them shorter that would help people who correct it a lot. If it was about half of the text it would be easier :) All the best and do not lose heart, just adapt the text Gillian
August 22, 2014
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