BigHeart
Please correct my entry, Thanks. 1 - The presence of the chairman of the board coupled with his two sons means that a very important decision will be made. I am expecting that one of them will inherit the responsibility. 2 - Your brother has made a lot of wrong decisions, which caused the failure of his marriage. In the same way, I can see you following his steps. Pay attention to your actions before the regret will be too late. 3 - I don't care so much about my clothes style. I think simple and colorful clothes are enough for me. In the other side, My brother cares so much about following latest fashion trends. and in the same fashion my cousin. They always spend a lot of time shopping together.4 - Three things you should follow to be a good teacher. First, be respectable. Respect your students, and don't accept anything from them except the respect. Second, be funny. Who likes the boring teacher?! try to make a funny atmosphere to keep your students attention always. Third, be concerned. Never ignore any one of your students when he tries to talk to you even if about personal matters. Always listen. 5 - In the light of the latest events in our school, there must be a deterrent punishment to anyone contravenes the schools rules and the instructions. Please correct my entry, or try to help me to express any of these sentences in a better way ( Like how native speakers would express ). May I ask you for one more thing? Could you please evaluate my sentences ( From 1 - 10 ) from your opinion ? Thanks in advance.
Oct 26, 2014 12:42 AM
Answers · 2
Thanks Paige, but I already posted it in the notebook entries, but no one give any attention.
October 26, 2014
I would post this in the "notebook" entries. I tried correcting it and I used too many characters :(
October 26, 2014
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