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Please correct these statements. Without parents' guidance at the initial start of our lives, life would've been difficult for us माँ-बाप की मार्गदर्शन बिना ज़िन्दगी मुश्किल होती Although we protested against many acts of violence in our cities, there's still a lot of intolerance present in our villages. हालांकि हम अपने शहरों में हिंसा के कई कृत्यों के खिलाफ विरोध की, हमारे गांवों में बहुत असहिष्णुता अभी भी मौजूद है. She likes to gossip just like the rest of her family. वह सिर्फ उसके बाकी परिवार की तरह गपशप पसंद करती है.
Jan 7, 2015 2:33 PM
Answers · 4
Ah...but I am invading the Hindi section! Sorry. ha ha
January 7, 2015
"She likes to gossip just like the rest of her family." This is an adequate sentence also. Perhaps a comma can be added to indicated a pause as follows: "She likes to gossip, just like the rest of her family."
January 7, 2015
"Although we protested against many acts of violence in our cities, there's still a lot of intolerance present in our villages." [Again, eliminate the contraction unless you are quoting speech. Use THERE IS.] This is generally a good construction. Nice writing.
January 7, 2015
Without parents' guidance at the initial start of our lives, life would've been difficult for us. [Do not use written contractions unless you are quoting dialogue. Here, use WOULD HAVE.] You can remove INITIAL because the start is "initial". "Without parent's guidance at the start of our lives, life would have been difficult for us." You could also express the idea this way, which is how I would word it. "Parental guidance at the start of our lives, prevents many difficulties later in life."
January 7, 2015
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