How good is my translation?
Original Text:
深蓝色的夜空中,星星一闪一闪地眨着眼睛。 青青草原上,小羊们 围坐在一起, 望着星空, 谈论着自己的愿望。他们可不知道, 一旁的草丛里, 有一双眼睛正恶狠狠地盯着他们。
I have translated as:
In the deep blue night sky, the stars were twinkling. On the green grass, the lambs were sitting together in a circle looking up into the starry sky and talking about their desires. They did not know that beside them in the bushes there was a pair of fierce looking eyes starring right at them.
Thank you.