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Canİ need change something in these sentences, To send AG and state raport in time and correctly To sumbit yearly vacation raport in a new format . To control using departament’s vacation’s days in accordance to the law and the given target. To submit employment contracts in electronic system
Jan 26, 2015 1:44 PM
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Canİ need change something in these sentences. Do I need to change something in these sentences ? Some of lines below are not sentences - they have no verb. So I am guessing. Some appear to be dot points that might be in a CV. To send AG and state reports correctly and on time . To submit yearly vacation the report in a new format . Note: in the next sentence, if you are referring to a internal company regulation, you would not use the word law -- it would be regulation. This sentence is more difficult than the others. "To control using department’s vacation’s days in accordance to the law and the given target." control implies that you regulate and authorize the leave (vacations) - perhaps "manage" is better. To manage the departments' leave days in accordance to legal requirements and to given targets. To submit employment contracts into the electronic system
January 28, 2015
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Unfortunately, yes. You have spelling and grammar errors, plus some of it just doesn't make any sense. What are you attempting here?
January 26, 2015
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