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Could you help me with this exercise ? Write an essay ( about 150- 200 words) that is started with this sentence: Our environment is polluted seriously. Help me! Please !
Mar 5, 2015 5:41 PM
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THIS IS ONE POSSIBLE PATTERN. DO NOT COPY IT. THIS PATTERN USES NONEXISTENT WORDS AND NONSENSE PHRASES. It illustrates one possible way to write such an essay. ("Frooglesnobulase," "raddigarben," "fracksprockets," and "snarkwidgets" are not real words). Our environment is seriously polluted. I am going to tell you about one form of pollution, then I am going to tell you why it is serious, and finally I am going to suggest some things that could be done to improve it. Emissions of frooglesnobulase in 2014 were three times as large as they were in 1984, because of the industrial use of frooglesnobulase to raddigarben fracksprockets in the manufacture of snarkwidgets. There is currently no regulation of frooglesnobulase and factories simply dump it into heaps, as tall as 50,000 meters high. How serious is this? The World Health Organization declared in 2014 that there is "a mounting frooglesnobulase crisis." Statistics show that the rate of eponyms of the Circle of Willis are elevated by 55% within 10 km. of snarkwidget factories. If nothing is done, by the year 2114 the entire world will be covered by frooglesnobulates to depth of 62.1 meters. What is the answer? There is no easy answer, but here is something you can do to alleviate the problem... The frooglesnobulase pollution problem is serious, but by taking these measures, we can reduce the problem enough to buy time to look for a more permanent solution.
March 5, 2015
Are you asking if someone will write this essay? If so, then no. I am happy to discuss, correct, or even help you with the vocabulary, but you will not benefit from me (or anyone) writing your essay. Use the "notebook" feature in italki or message me with your thoughts and I will be happy to help.
March 5, 2015
Your next sentence should begin, "This is because... ."
March 5, 2015
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