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Can you correct my homework About a week ago I and my classmates left to Peschiera del Garda to take a school trip of five days. The journey was fanny we sang an played all time. We arrived at the hotel at 8 o' clock it was in a beautiful area near Garda's lake, but it was full of any size toy frogs. The second day we visited Verona and we went to the House of Juliet and we saw the most famous balcony of Italy. There were a lot of padlocks. The third day we visited the Made Expo and after that we went to Milano. The fourth day we visited Venice. We saw Piazza San Marco the Ponte dei sospiri abd Ponte Rialto and we went on a veneciant boat it was charming. The last day we came back and at the retourn we visited Rimini.
Mar 27, 2015 8:50 PM
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About a week ago my classmates and I went on a school trip to Peschiera del Garda for five days. The journey was fun: we sang and played for the entire duration of it. We arrived at the hotel at 8 o'clock; it resided in a beautiful area close to Garda's lake, but it was full of toy frogs of all kinds of sizes.(Are you sure that their meant to be toy frogs?) On the second day we visited Verona and went to the House of Juliet: we saw the most famous balcony in Italy. There were a lot of padlocks. On the third day, after we visited the Made Expo, we went to Milano. On the day the following day we went to Venice and saw Piazza San Marco the Ponte dei sospiri and Ponte Rialto. We also went on a veneciant boat which was charming. Finally on the last day we came back and on the return journey we visited Rimini. I corrected a few mistakes that Suresh made, just minor lapses in grammar. Although for several bits of your piece I was a bit confused about what you wanted to say, e.g the bit about toy frogs. Also I don't know much about 'Piazza San Marco' so I don't know whether that should be 'the Piazza etc.' Either way hope I could help :)
March 27, 2015
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About a week ago me and my classmates went to Peschiera del Garda to take a school trip of five days. The journey was funny.When at that time we were sang and played all the time. We arrived at the hotel at 8 o' clock it was in a beautiful area near Garda's lake, but it was full of toy frogs at any sizes. The second day we visited Verona and we went to the House of Juliet and we saw the most famous balcony of Italy. There were a lot of padlocks. The third day we visited the Made Expo and after that we went to Milano. The fourth day we visited Venice. We saw Piazza San Marco the Ponte dei sospiri abd Ponte Rialto and we went to a veneciant boat it was charming. The last day we came back and at the return we visited Rimini.
March 27, 2015
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