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Question about resume They are for resume. Do these make sense? Awards: International Students Scholarship Internship: Worked in Records Office and Development Volunteerism: Assisted dining kichen and accommoderation in Seattle Camp
May 22, 2015 4:52 PM
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Unfortunately there are some errors here - my corrections are below with asterisks indicating where I made changes: - Awards: International Student* Scholarship [from what institution/country/school?]* - Internship: Worked in the Records and Development Offices* of [what institution/business/school?]* - Volunteerism: Assisted *with food preparation at *[which Seattle Camp specifically] accommodations may have been the word you were looking for, but am unsure what "accommodations" you would have been helping with at the aforementioned "Seattle Camp" so if there is something other than food preparation that you did in your volunteer gig, then it would be best to specify that. Misspellings and grammatical errors in the above posting: - "Question about resume" should be rewritten as "Question about my resume" - "They are for resume" should be rewritten as "They are for my resume" - "Students Scholarship" should be written as either "Student Scholarship" as I have edited it above, or as "Student's Scholarship" in singular possessive case or "Students' Scholarship" in the plural possessive case. - "Worked in Records Office and Development" could be referring to a number of things - my correction above presumes that you worked in both the Records office and the Development office of the unnamed institution as an Intern. If instead you are trying to say that you worked in a single office that dealt with records and development, then you'll want to lookup the exact name of the office you interned with and list that along with the name of the institution. - "kichen" is spelled with a t before the ch for "kitchen" - "accommoderation" is spelled "accommodation" or "accommodations" more usually Hope this helps!
May 22, 2015
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