She likes to take photo very much - she likes to take photos/photographs very much. This picture was taken by her. (Good) It was really a good angle.(Good) or alternatively....It was a really good angle. A clear reflection of the library in the water.(Good) And she was very impressed by the good drawing on the manhole cover. -She was very impressed by the design of the manhole cover. (I don't think you would draw on a manhole cover - also good/impressive mean the same). So she took some pictures of them to share with her college classmates. (Good) A cartoon character called Luffy. (Good) A cartoon character called Totoro, and it's my favorite cartoon because it's so adorable.- My favourite cartoon character is called Totoro because it's so adorable. This is a funny onion. (Good) This is a showering man.- This is a man showering. It's funny,too. (Good). I am so delighted that she had a good time in here.- I am so delighted she had a good time here.

She likes take photo very much. -> She likes taking photos very much. This picture was taken by her. -> Perfect! It was really a good angle. -> Perfect! A clear reflection of the library in the water: Needs a verb -> It was a clear reflection of the library in the water. And she was very impressed by the good drawing on the manhole cover: Avoiding starting sentence with "And" -> Also, she was very impressed by the good drawing on the manhole covore. So she took some pictures of them to share with her college classmates. -> Perfect! A cartoon character called Luffy. + A cartoon character called Totoro, and it's my favorite cartoon because it's so adorable. Need verbs. Best to join with ":": So she took some pictures of them to share with her college classmates: a cartoon character called Luffy, and a cartoon character called Totoro: it's my favorite cartoon because it's so adorable. This is a funny onion. -> Perfect! This is a showering man. -> Perfect! It's funny,too. -> Perfect! I am so delighted that she had a good time in here. -> Perfect!