0:06-长沙执法部门(correct)
0:10-截停了一辆非法改装的面包车
“截停” means "intercept","force... to stop"
0:23-准备对面包车司机杜某罚款5百元并责令他回复车辆原状。
0:28-然而就在民警填写处罚决定书时
1:11-但肇事司机毫不避让(correct)
1:56-当天遇上了烦心事,又听到要被罚款,就火了。
“烦心事” means "something annoying"
you've done most of the sentences correctly,well done.