Hello, Your vocabularyis very nice and descriptive :-). The first one should probably be 'this music lifts me in the air' however 'this music lifts my spirits' is probably more accurate. For the second one, it should be that the music 'takes me into the clouds' or something. The third one is very nice, the only flaws are that it should be 'penetrates' not 'penetrate', and the word 'in' is unnecessary here. Therefore it should be 'this music penetrates my soul'. The fourth one is perfect as it is. In fact, I like it most because you can use it conversationally. The word 'penetrate' is a little more descriptive, and you would not use it when talking to a friend. Hope this helps!