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In May Last year, an accident occured that a man in 20s was electrocuted as he got up on a freight train stopped at the XXX station in line 1.
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Aug 30, 2015 9:43 AM
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In May Last year, an accident occurred in which a man in his 20s was electrocuted as he got up on to a freight train which had stopped at the XXX station in line 1.
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