If you wish to discuss the adequacy of the official Chinese translation - a serious subject - it is best to quote both the English original by Tolkien and the Chinese translation (with the names of the translators and the publishers) and put forward your views explaining why you have doubts about the translation. Then members may come forward to participate in an intelligent and responsible discussion.

其实可以将句子分解，或进行缩写： 1. 有一股子臭味，是最简单的句子原型。 2. 透字可以翻译成透露，散发。所以，透着一股子臭味儿，相当于散发着一股臭味儿。 3. 泥腥味，尤其是有螃蟹出没，或者江河边的淤泥，会有一股难闻的臭味，那种臭就叫腥臭，鱼身上的叫鱼腥味，泥里的自然叫做泥腥味