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How do you think about my blog? http://falentinoekalaksanaputra.blogspot.com/

if you do not mind give your comment to my blog for improvement. thank you very much

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    It's interesting, for sure!

    Hello Falentino,
    I have made some changes to your introduction paragraph.
    ORIGINAL TEXT:
    "this blog dedicated for all my best friends who live any where/whole the world. with "friendship" i hope we can share each other to make this world better. *UNITED FRIENDS* Hello,How are you?"

    Changes:

    This blog is dedicated to all my best friends, who live around the world. I hope we can share friendship to make this world better.

    Hope it helps,

    Lee.

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