The Tim じぁん!!!
It’s fairly sunny today. In my class, I learned needs and wants, and how to spend our money wisely. In my opinion, it’s easier said than done. I think my mom has a difficulty to define what are needs. To her, everything she wants are needs and the others' needs are wants. Even I can tell the utility bills and mortgage payments must be dealt with first. She could have managed things better if she had learned this lesson at my age. God bless her heart.
Sep 26, 2022 8:57 AM
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It’s fairly sunny today. At school, I've learned 'Needs and Wants', and how to spend our money wisely. In my opinion, it’s easier said than done. My mom, for example, has a difficulty to define what needs are. To her, everything she wants is a need, whereas the others' needs are wants. I can even tell her that the utility bills and mortgage payments must be dealt with first. She could manage things better if she had learned this lesson at my age. God bless her heart.
I've changed a few things but the writing is quite good. 'Even I can tell' sounds I've changed 'in my class' because is more common 'at school'. Obviously, everything you learn is in your class. 'Tell her' or 'say': I can even tell her that... I can even say that... And the third conditional 'She could have managed...' this would mean that your mom either passed away or doesn't live with you. However, you say 'I can even tell her...' which suggests that this happens in the present. I hope this helps 🙂 Cheers 🥂
September 26, 2022
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It’s fairly sunny today. In my class, I learned needs and wants, and how to spend our money wisely. In my opinion, it’s easier said than done. I think my mom has difficulty in defining what are needs. To her, everything she wants is a need and the others' needs are wants. Even I can tell the utility bills and mortgage payments must be dealt with first. She could have managed things better if she had learned this lesson at my age. God bless her heart.
Haha. They should put you in charge of the budget. You would ban beer and haircuts! Lol.
September 26, 2022
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It’s fairly sunny today. In my class, I learned 'needs' and 'wants', and how to spend our money wisely. In my opinion, it’s easier said than done. I think my mom has difficulties in defining her 'needs'. To her, everything she wants are needs and the others' needs are wants. Even I can tell the utility bills and mortgage payments must be dealt with first. She could have managed things better if she had learned this lesson at my age. God bless her heart.
I do enjoy your writing, Tim.
September 26, 2022
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