Johanna
Please correct my mistakes ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด๋ž€ ๋ถ€๋ชจ๊ฐ€ ์ž๋…€์—๊ฒŒ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์„ ๋ฌผ์ด์—์š”. ์ €๋Š” ์–ด๋ ธ์„ ๋•Œ ์žฌ ๋ถ€๋ชจ๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๋งค์ผ ์ผ์„ ํ–ˆ์—ˆ์œผ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ, ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ถ€๋ชจ๋‹˜๊ณผ ๋ณ„๋กœ ์นœํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์–ด์š”. ์ €์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด๋ƒˆ์œผ๋ฉด, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๊ธด๋ฐ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์กฑ์ด ๋˜์—ˆ์–ด์š”. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์—„๋งˆ๋ž‘ ์•„๋น ๊ฐ€ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๊ฐ™์ด ๋จน๋Š” ์™ธ์‹๋„ ์ข‹์€ ์„ ๋ฌผ์ธ ๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ™์•„์š” ๐Ÿคช
Apr 22, 2021 1:44 PM
Corrections ยท 3
Please correct my mistakes ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด๋ž€ ๋ถ€๋ชจ๊ฐ€ ์ž๋…€์—๊ฒŒ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์„ ๋ฌผ์ด์—์š”. ์ €๋Š” ์–ด๋ ธ์„ ๋•Œ ๋ถ€๋ชจ๋‹˜์ด ๋งค์ผ ์ผ์„ ํ–ˆ์—ˆ์–ด์„œ, ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ถ€๋ชจ๋‹˜๊ณผ ๋ณ„๋กœ ์นœํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์–ด์š”. ์ €์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋ณด๋ƒˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๊ธด๋ฐ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์กฑ์ด ๋˜์—ˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด์˜ˆ์š”/๋์„ํ…๋ฐ. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์—„๋งˆ๋ž‘ ์•„๋น ๊ฐ€ ์ €์—๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉฐ ๊ฐ™์ด ๋จน๋Š” ์™ธ์‹๋„ ์ข‹์€ ์„ ๋ฌผ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š” ๐Ÿคช
April 22, 2021
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