Miriama
After work I went outside with my friend for a walk. When we walked cross the bridge we looked down and saw many coypus which were in riverside on a island under the bridge. So we went down to see them closer. They are really fearless and come to people in thought that they have some food or vegetables for them. We took couple pictures and walked around the island and enjoyed scene when coypus were feeding on the grass and swans swum in the river. I really enjoyed this moment and I’m blissful that I live in this lovely area.
Mar 2, 2021 8:58 PM
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After work I went outside with my friend for a walk. When we walked cross the bridge we looked down and saw many coypus which were in riverside on a island under the bridge. So we went down to see them closer. They are really fearless and come to people in thought that they have some food or vegetables for them. We took couple pictures and walked around the island and enjoyed scene when coypus were feeding on the grass and swans swum in the river. I really enjoyed this moment and I’m blissful that I live in this lovely area. If you wanted to make it shorter you could say this... After work my friend and I went for a walk by the river. We saw many coypus (we call them beavers), so we went for a closer look and found out they're friendly. The scenery was beautiful lush green grass, swimming swans and cute coypus eating veggies. I really love the pic its so cuteee 😊
March 3, 2021
After work I went outside with my friend for a walk. When we walked across the bridge we looked down and saw many coypus which were on the banks of the river on a island under the bridge. So we went down to see them closer. They are really fearless and come to people who they think have some food or vegetables for them. We took a couple of pictures and walked around the island and enjoyed the scene where the coypus were feeding on the grass and swans swam in the river. I really enjoyed this moment and I’m happy that I live in this lovely area.
Interesting piece of writing and very well written. Thank you for introducing me to coypus - I had never heard of them before!
March 2, 2021
After work I went outside with my friend for a walk. When we walked cross the bridge we looked down and saw many coypus which were in riverside on a island under the bridge. So we went down to see them closer. They are really fearless and come to people in thought that they have some food or vegetables for them. We took couple pictures and walked around the island and enjoyed scene when coypus were feeding on the grass and swans swum in the river. I really enjoyed this moment and I’m blissful that I live in this lovely area.
Hey may I know your current level in English?
May 6, 2021
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