This a good option, you know, it can be very good and very bad at the same time. Why? It can be good to have a credit card because you can pay for everything like your house's servises, and something

Leo3600

This a good option, you know, it can be very good and very bad at the same time. Why? It can be good to have a credit card because you can pay for everything like your house's servises, and something that you want and things like these. Now we are in the bad points this is bad because you can buy things that you don't need and this is just a whim, yeah it is good one or two times just, but if you start to buy uneccesary things like shoes to your dog and clothes to your fingers(are just examples) and it can become a bad habit and you are going to spend your money in that, and not in really neccesary things.

Oct 6, 2021 4:44 PM

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Invitee

Credit cards can be good and also very bad. Having can be good to have if you need to pay for something in an emergency when you do not have cash or for things like your house's services, and other items. On the other hand, you could buy things that you don't need and this is just a whim. It is okay to spend on some things that are not essential just one or two times, but if you start to buy unnecessary things like shoes for your dog and clothes for your fingers, it can become a bad habit. You are spending money that you don't have, on unnecessary items and will have to pay back that money in time.

You have good ideas in here but when writing, try not to write the way you speak. I've added a few more ideas to give the answer more substance. Please also always check your spelling. You must be careful of prepositions, you should say: buy shoes FOR a dog. It is not TO a dog. I also could not understand what you meant by "clothes for your fingers". Do you mean gloves? Maybe change that to say "take expensive holidays". I also added a part about not being able to pay back the money because that is an important problem when using credit cards. Another thing you must try to do is break up very long sentences into two or more sentences.

October 7, 2021

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