Would you correct my article?? Some parents teach their children at home rather than sending them to school. Is this a good or a bad thing for the children? The importance of going to school. I assume the essay starts here. I am looking at this from an IELTS perspective which means you don't need a title. In the past it was pretty common that parents taught their children at home rather than sending them to school. Nowadays, the importance of sending children at school has grown, since school is even more important than simply a place where children can build their knowledge. First of all, having parents as a teacher is not good since parents are not capable enough of teaching all the subjects that are taught at school. Moreover, children are too familiar with their parents so they cannot take them seriously. Secondly, the most important thing that children learn at school is how to relate with other people. They build their characters by making friends with their schoolmates. The relationships of their childhoods have a huge impact on their futures. Last but not least, going to school is also an opportunity to become independent. Every school organizes lots of school trips every year that give children the opportunity to travel without their parents and open their minds. In conclusion, I think that school years are a very important part of everyone’s life and nothing can replace them.

Would you correct my article?? Some parents teach their children at home rather than sending them to school. Is this a good or a bad thing for the child? The importance of going to school. (do you mean ‘going to school is important’, or is this an introduction sentence?) In the past it was pretty (pretty is absolutely correct but ‘quite’ is more commonly used) common that parents taught their children at home rather than sending them to school. Nowadays, the importance of sending children to school has grown, since school is more than a place where children can build their knowledge. First of all, having parents as teachers is not good since parents are not capable enough of teaching all the subjects that are taught at schools. Moreover, children are familiar with/used to be around their parents so they cannot take them seriously. Secondly, the most important thing that children learn at school is how to relate with other people. They build their character making friends with their schoolmates. The relationships of their childhood have a huge impact on their future. Last but not least, going to school is also an opportunity to become independent. Every year, schools organise lots of school trips that give the children the opportunity to travel without parents, and open their minds. In conclusion, I think that school years are a very important part of people’s lives and nothing can replace them.