In April, when Easter was, my mum with my younger sister made unusual paper eggs. On the one side there were patterns, on the other side there were animals' youngs. And my mum drew a dinosaur! You can

Anna

In April, when Easter was, my mum with my younger sister made unusual paper eggs. On the one side there were patterns, on the other side there were animals' youngs. And my mum drew a dinosaur! You can see it on the picture. It was so cute that I asked her to draw the same on my shirt. So I'm still waiting for my fine shirt...

Aug 9, 2020 5:50 PM

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In April, when it was Easter, my mum and my little sister made unusual Easter eggs. On the one side there were patterns, on the other side there were animal babies. And my mum drew a dinosaur! You can see it in the picture. It was so cute that I asked her to draw the same picture on my shirt. So I'm still waiting for my shirt...

Really good job! Just some minor mistakes that will get better as you learn the more common ways of writing in English.

August 9, 2020

In April, over Easter, my mum and my younger sister made unusual paper eggs. On the one side there were patterns, on the other side there were animal young. And my mum drew a dinosaur! You can see it in the picture. It was so cute that I asked her to draw the same on my shirt. So I'm still waiting for my fine shirt...

Nicely done, Anna! The text was great and very easy to read. The idea of making paper eggs and adorning them with pictures is also very cool. I might have to try it myself.

August 10, 2020

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