A few weeks ago I bought this teapot in IKEA to enjoy the tea. It so delightful to drink a hot fragrant tea while it almost winter behind a window. Everytime when I drink it I remember place Nothern A

Lena Taranenko

A few weeks ago I bought this teapot in IKEA to enjoy the tea. It so delightful to drink a hot fragrant tea while it almost winter behind a window. Everytime when I drink it I remember place Nothern Altay mountains where I take this thyme tea. And my soul filled with warmth when I feel smell of strawberries, chamomile, leaves of currant because my mom collected for me all that magic tea. So it like a teleport to sweet memories.

Oct 10, 2020 6:04 PM

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A few weeks ago I bought this teapot in IKEA to enjoy tea. It was so delightful to drink a hot, fragrant tea while seeing as it was almost winter behind a window. Every time I drink it, I remember place called Nothern Altay mountains, which is where I take this thyme tea; my soul filled with warmth and my nose sensing the smell of strawberries, chamomile, leaves of currant because my mom had collected, for me, all that magic tea. It always feels like a teleport to sweet memories.

Hey there! I liked your range of vocabulary lots. However, I saw many grammatical errors. There were instances where words needed to be added or subtracted. One thing I’d advise is to not use conjunction-words (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so, etc.) at the beginning of a sentence until they can be used that way properly. Sometimes those words should be used to elongate and elaborate the previous clause. I’m hoping you’ll continue using splendid vocabulary, and that this helps.

October 10, 2020

A few weeks ago I bought this teapot at IKEA to enjoy my tea. It is so delightful to drink a hot fragrant tea when it is almost winter. Every time I drink it, I remember a place in Nothern Altay mountains where I take this thyme tea. And my soul is filled with warmth when I smell the scent of strawberries, chamomile, and leaves of currant because my mom collected them for me to make that magic tea. So it like a teleport to those sweet memories.

October 10, 2020

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