I think your informal writing style is great, so it's not appropriate for me to nit-pick corrections :)

It's sunny and the sky is clear. When my mom was on her way to pick me up from school, her car broke down. We'll I am not surprised because it's and old blue beetle car (way older than me). Some people do value old things, especially cars. Our beetle car has always been taking me from here to there back in my childhood days until now. I love it and I hope that it will be fixed soon.

It’s sunny and cloudless today. After school, on my mom’s manner to select out me up, my mom’s vehicle has damaged down. There’s no wonder due to the fact it’s an antique, blue beetle, even manner older than me. People have feeling for antique things, in particular cars. Our beetle has been taking me from right here to there, considering the fact that I became a itty-bitty thing. I adore it and I desire it could be constant soon. Today’s phrase is “beetle”. I can’t stand creepy-crawlies, however beetles are exceptions

I hope the Beetle survives. Beetle here is the name of the car so needs a B.