Chloe
Could someone correct it? There are three mountains on the shoulders of people:education, health care and housing. The Chinese government has recently introduces series of policies to reduce the burden of people. In my opinion, the fundamental purpose of  these policies is to reduce the cost of living,encourage childbirth and finally increase  the population. If the cost of  raising a child is too high, you’re not  willing to have another one. For example, Chinese government has put some restrictions on tutor school. Children under 18 is not allowed to attend tutor  on weekdays ,such as subjects like mathematics and language, but with the exception of musical instruments and painting. This is a good news for both parents and children. Because  it is very  common that the teacher of  a primary school won’t teach Pinyin again, if all the pupils in her class have already learned it in the tutor school.  Or she will teach it quickly , in the case that most have learned it.
Oct 3, 2021 6:20 AM
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Could someone correct it? There are three mountains on the shoulders of people:education, health care and housing. The Chinese government has recently introduced a range of policies to reduce the people's burdens. In my opinion, the fundamental purpose of these policies is to reduce the costs of living, encourage childbirths and eventually increase the population. If the costs of raising a child are high, people are unwilling to have another child. For instance, the government has imposed some restrictions on tutoring school. Children under 18 are not allowed to attend tutoring schools on weekdays for subjects like mathematics and languages, but with the exception of musical instruments and painting. This is indeed good news for both parents and children. It is common that the primary school teacher won’t teach Pinyin again, if all the pupils in her class have already learned it in the tutoring school. Or she will teach it quickly, if most of her students have learned it.
As I dun really understand the situation in China, I can't comment too much.
October 3, 2021
Could someone correct it? There are three mountains on the shoulders of people:education, health care and housing. The Chinese government has recently introduces series of policies to reduce the burden of people. In my opinion, the fundamental purpose of these policies is to reduce the cost of living,encourage childbirth and finally increase the population. If the cost of raising a child is too high, you’re not willing to have another one. For example, Chinese government has put some restrictions on tutor school. Children under 18 is not allowed to attend tutor on weekdays ,such as subjects like mathematics and language, but with the exception of musical instruments and painting. This is a good news for both parents and children. Because it is very common that the teacher of a primary school won’t teach Pinyin again, if all the pupils in her class have already learned it in the tutor school. Or she will teach it quickly , in the case that most have learned it.
There are three mountains on the shoulders of people:education, health care and housing. What do you mean??
October 3, 2021
Could someone correct it? There are three mountains on the shoulders of people: education, health care and housing. The Chinese government has recently introduced a series of policies to reduce the burdens placed on people. In my opinion, the fundamental purpose of these policies is to reduce the cost of living, encourage childbirth and hence increase the population. If the cost of raising a child is too high, you might not be willing to have another one. To help reduce costs, the Chinese government has put some restrictions on tutor schools. Children under 18 are not allowed to be tutored on weekdays in core subjects such as mathematics and language. However, they can study playing musical instruments and painting. This is good news for both parents and children. For example, it is very common that a teacher in a primary school won’t teach Pinyin again, if all the pupils in her class have already learned it at tutor school. Or she will teach it quickly, on the assumption that most will have already learned it. Therefore without tutoring teachers will know what their students have learned.
Well done. There are big changes in China!
October 3, 2021
Could someone correct it? There are three mountains on the shoulders of people: education, health care and housing. The Chinese government has recently introduced a series of policies to reduce the burdens people face. In my opinion, the fundamental purpose of these policies is to reduce the cost of living, encourage childbirth and, finally, increase the population. If the cost of raising a child is too high, you won't be willing to have another. For example, the Chinese government has put some restrictions on tutoring schools. Children under 18 are not allowed to attend tutoring on weekdays for subjects such as mathematics and languages. The only exceptions are for musical instruments and painting. This is good news for both parents and children because it is very common for primary school teachers to skip teaching Pinyin if all the pupils in her class have already learned it at the tutoring school.  Or she will teach it quickly, in the case that most have already learned it.
October 3, 2021
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