Hi guys, I'm a chinese girl attending college. I would like to improve my English. Besides, I like making friends. Hope you we can make be or become friends with me ,no matter where you come from or live/location.

Nice to meet you.

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hello.how are you? i'm fine, i hope you also good.

i'm also like making friends all aver the world and improving our english. Thank you very much.

Hi, Katherine, how're you doing? that's awesome idea. May you have friends you wish for. good luck

Nice to meet you