kindly make corrections to improve me...thank you in advance It is a letter writting task. You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the

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kindly make corrections to improve me...thank you in advance It is a letter writting task. You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Dear Jenny, I hope this letter will find you in best shape. I am writing to tell you that I unfortunately, will not able to make out to your place in August as planned earlier. I was requested to attend the 50th anniversary of our school at a very short notice and it would be very harsh from my side avoiding the occasion. I regret for ruining our plan and am sorry for that. However, I was thinking of flying off at your place in September after the school opening anniversary with my daughter. So, I was wondering if you can spare sometime of a week during the time and I book the ticket according as soon as possible. I look forward to hear from you on this and can’t wait to see you after ages. With Regards Karner

Feb 16, 2013 8:03 AM

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kindly make corrections to improve me...thank you in advance

It is a letter writting task.
You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.

Dear Jenny,
I hope this letter will find you in good shape. I am writing to tell you that I unfortunately will not able to come to your place in August as planned earlier. I was requested to attend the 50th anniversary of our school at a very short notice and it would be wrong to avoid the occasion. I regret for ruining our plan and I am sorry for that.
However, I was thinking of flying to your place in September after the school opening anniversary, with my daughter. So, I was wondering if you can spare some time of a week during that time and I could book the ticket accordingly as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you on this and I can’t wait to see you after ages.
With (warm or kind) regards (or With love),
Karner