Hi Katty! What a sweet thing to share about your cutlure! Here are a few corrections/suggestions for you: Something interesting I would like to mention (you can say "share") about our (my) culture is the hospitality. We love to have visitors in our houses (I would recommend changing this word to "homes", because it gives the meaning a more personal/intimate feel) if you need help you will have for sure someone is going to help you (someone will surely be there to help you.) we are friendly and open with foreign people. (We are friendly and open with foreigners.) 😊 Here are two different ways to write your message: Option 1: Something interesting I would like to mention about my culture is the hospitality. We love to have visitors in our homes. If you need help, someone will surely help you. We are friendly and open with foreigners.😊 Option 2: Something interesting I would like to share about my culture is the hospitality. We love to have visitors in our homes, and if you need help, someone will surely help you. We are friendly and open with foreigners.😊