Hey Mandy! This text is well written! Just a few simple errors here and there that we can fix :) Note you used the plural “carrots” and so we have to follow that trend onwards! That’s why we say “koalas” and “leaves.” Also note this part now has to be said in the past tense so we use “fed.” That’s a bit confusing I believe… Since you’ve used the subject “I,” you don’t have to repeat another “I” or the “bread” again! See how it makes the sentence flow better and mean the same thing. For the last sentence we have to meet the subject-verb agreement. Since the subject “donkey” is the singular, then the verb will have to be singular as well! We’d have to say “is” instead! Hope this all helps :)