Could someone check this email and make it sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. Hello A few days ago, we talked about this matter again You told me that the booking deal of the pick up of the pallets from Madrid was closed on 02.06 and you checked the documents for the pick up from Barcelona that week. As we have discussed on repeated occasions , as of today, we do not have enough space to work safely in our store and we need them to be picked up as soon as possible. Could you please let me know the status of these pick ups? I am eager to hear back from you (with good news I hope).

Hello (address by name) A few days ago, we again discussed this matter. You told me that the booking deal of the pick up of the pallets from Madrid closed on 02.06 and you checked the documents for the pick up from Barcelona that week. As we have discussed repeatedly, as of today, we do not have enough space to work safely in our store and we need them picked up as soon as possible. Could you please let me know when you will be picking them up? I am eager to hear back from you! Sincerely, Your full name