Hi Zohreh,
Overall, your English is great. There were, however, some minor issues that you can work on. I'm posting the corrected versions of your statements here:
- The phrase should be: "Beauty is considered"
- The word "precise" should be pronounced "pre-cise". What you said sounded to me like "pur-cise".
Overall, you have expressed yourself well, and given very relevant arguments. Well done!