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give your thoughts on this poem I wrote The sky was shaking......... with my sight focused on the ground insecurity was reigning (or raining) I lifted up my eyes, and reality was found just a small puddle in my life
Sep 16, 2008 1:08 PM
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Great.
September 16, 2008
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good theme, if the order of some words changed, then how ...
September 17, 2008
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Good! write some more.. But this time include the word darkness.. Or sorrow.. Thanks
September 16, 2008
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Dutch, English, Japanese, Other, Papiamento, Spanish
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