This would be easier to look at as a notebook entry, I think. Uprising - good Momentum - good Summons - good but change to "Summons the citizens" Hinterland - not really a word we use in English. In USA, when we are talking about a movement coming from the citizens, we call that a GRASSROOTS movement. "The newspapers BANNER photos of the BUSTLING street of the Capital City." - This isn't a complete sentence. It is a fragment. It makes sense though but needs an ending such as 'show that the people are revolting.' In Short - good Byproduct - good. It is one word without a hyphen (-) To the already known manifold - good but I wouldn't use it there. Perhaps it is used that way in science environs. Consequential - good. Remove: already. This makes it seem like it already happened but the previous sentence makes it clear this new byproduct has just been found. Take the market by storm - good To shake it up - good but needs 'and' before instead of just a comma (,) Craving/Hankering - ok. It doesn't sound quite right. I would say: ... the public is anxious to know about the new product. Craving implies they already know what it is and want to consume it. Same with Hankering, I think. Grunting - implies a struggle. Snarling or growling would be better, I think. Roaring - good Gasping - good Brussel Sprout - good. two words, no hyphen (-) Of a piece ... stew - word order: a piece in that stew I hope that is helpful!