would you mind poining out the mistakes among those sentence ,thank you very much 1The better you treat her, the less she cherish,so is human nature 2Bank 's interest rise not as quickly as the price of commosities 3The key to master something in the shortest time is to fully devote yourself to it,and remove all distractions 4Every time it comes to winter,my eating amount begin to soar 5These troublethings happen to everyone in their life and workplace but which shouldn't be the excuses of not being brave and optimistic