Please help me to correct "it is considered" In addition, if it is considered a person’s income based on their relative contribution to society the incomes of entertainers seem too high. Can I use "

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Please help me to correct "it is considered" In addition, if it is considered a person’s income based on their relative contribution to society the incomes of entertainers seem too high. Can I use "it is considered" like this and does it make sense?

Nov 12, 2017 7:20 AM

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No, but here's the correct sentence: In addition, if a person’s income based on their relative contribution to society is considered, the incomes of entertainers seem too high.

November 12, 2017